All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 15'

I just read the whole series (so far), and I have to say this is brilliant. Sufficiently original (nothing is completely original, after all) and beautifully told.

I must admit you fooled me with the "I was the first" heading to this story. I thought Wendy would pull Alicia aside and remind Alicia that Wendy was "the first". Instead, of course, it refers to James being Alicia's first lover. I do enjoy how each woman reacts to the potion according to her own personality. It makes for a nice variety throughout this story, instead of them all having the same "zombie-like" reaction to the drug. The "George and Sue" dinner looks like possible trouble. Of course, "Sue" may no longer be his wife. He may actually have remarried a much younger female. Of course, if Sue is still around, the "age factor" may not really matter. I look forward to how you work out this scenario in your story.

have just read all the episodes that you have written so far and have really enjoyed them.This series is different from anything else on Lit and I am now looking forward to the next chapter.