by Londonchap
Enjoyed how James did contact each female to arrange to see each one of them. As you added to the story, this doesn't include the gals that these females may have gushed about James to, so there's probably numerous others that will join the crowd, whether James wants them two or not. I know you want to keep the story flowing along, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE give each gal (or group of gals) their own sex scenes and vary it as much as possible according to their sexual preferences. I much look forward to your future parts when you are able to post them. I have commented on every part you have written so far and I much look forward to your continued exploration of the human sexual and emotional condition - both good and bad.
This is an entertaining twist on the whole mind-control concept. It's fun and its funny. Keep up the great work.