by Londonchap
Good story. Good writing. And it seems that you are working on incorporating just about every fetish there is in this story. As for Florence, I hadn't expected her to even speak English, let alone so fluently. Still, chapters are a little on the short side. A little longer please?
I'm still angry over the slave business. I'm hoping that Florence's boyfriend somehow tracks James down and beats the crap out of him. I am close to quitting reading this story, because I find the slave bull so distasteful. I will, however, await James' 50th birthday and read the "LUST MANSION" portion of your story before I decide on continuing to read or not.