All Comments on 'Free Universal Carnal Knowledge Pt. 29'

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Jedi_KhanJedi_Khanover 16 years ago
Rather...um, interesting

Good story. Good writing. And it seems that you are working on incorporating just about every fetish there is in this story. As for Florence, I hadn't expected her to even speak English, let alone so fluently. Still, chapters are a little on the short side. A little longer please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
FLORENCE THE SLAVE

I'm still angry over the slave business. I'm hoping that Florence's boyfriend somehow tracks James down and beats the crap out of him. I am close to quitting reading this story, because I find the slave bull so distasteful. I will, however, await James' 50th birthday and read the "LUST MANSION" portion of your story before I decide on continuing to read or not.

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