All Comments on 'Free Use Pt. 01'

I enjoy “Free Use” erotica. Your first has a lot of promise. Flesh it out more in the next chapter and let’s see what adventures are in store for Danny.

Creative idea; clumsy writing.

I sure hope there is more to the story because that was a very poor ending. Does Danny find his home, does he go to the bank, does he have to be at work at some point where he struggles to figure out what it is he's supposed to teach, will there be a cute coed with a professor fetish? If you think what you presented to us is enough of a story, try again.