All Comments on 'Freedom'

Edge of your seat thriller. Love that without any dialog between the characters so much emotion was felt. Every brutal attack and the thoughts of each character felt so raw and real. I felt like I was inside Jordan's mind feeling his anger at being convicted for something he did not do. He knew using her to take out his revenge was wrong but also looked at her as a vessel to release his anger. Pamela was the perfect victim for his anger because he found someone as broken mentally although because of extremely different situations. Many women can relate to Pamela's thoughts of hopelessness despite what appears to be a normal life of privilege. Many little girls at an early age are molded and trained to be dutiful daughters while being berated for not meeting their mother's goals, They end up marrying the right person that pleases their mom but does nothing for their own happiness. Ironically these women are submissive of a different type. I wanted to give 5 stars and the writing truly deserves it but deep down I wanted Pamela to have found her strength to speak up without fear. To truly become an independent woman. But maybe the story ended up going the direction she really needed, to be controlled but in a way that gave her the satisfaction she needed for herself.

You are a great writer and I look forward to seeing more stories.

I need a second part of this masterpiece