All Comments on 'Freestyle Domination'

That was horrible, wasn't even the beginning of a story.

I thought it was well written - grammar and spelling not disconcerting, nice premise, good sex, etc.

Sissy boy got played

I hate to say it, but I think it was AI assist generated. They just aren't very good yet; they don't yet come across feeling authentic.

Nicely done, keeping him on the edge for so long, and not alone . . . Most male readers, in my humble opinion, related well with the entire primer.

Was the frequent lesbial comparison to the girls a hint of what may be included in future training sessions? Just asking as I usuallydespise commentors dictating future exploits.

More a tease than a story, so hoping there's more chapters coming. Hmu if you want a proofreader/ editor for future works. (I'm good at catching stuff like using 'compiled' instead of 'complied')