All Comments on 'Fresh Gayman'

The idea is really good, but you skipped all the good parts, the first time is barely explained, and these scene happens to fast. It would be hotter if we could read more about what they were doing, the feelings, how the guys look, conversations, etc.

It would be incredible to be Billy, sucking cock after cock and tasting load after load of sperm.

Isn't that what being in college is all about. Experimenting and finding out who you really are. Probably not what his parents had in mind, but good for him for taking a stand and making his own choices. And I'm fairly sure that by the end of his intuition, Billy will be able to suck off all twenty-three members of Phi Alpha Gamma without getting a sore jaw. ;-) This was a fun story to read, hope you continue it. Thanks, MLF

@cat_sucker yeah, I see your point. I wanted to write a short scene about a guy waking up to his frat bros using him and his clothes as cum tissues and sending him out on his way to feel their sperm all day, but the setup I added does sound like something really fun to read. I'll keep your comment in mind for future writing projects.

I am definitely adding “nutsludge” to my vocabulary. And the cummy face mask? That’s a touch of pandemic genius. Five Stars from me.

"Nutsludge?"