All Comments on 'Fresh Meat At The Prison'

Amazing!!

I like the premise and would love to read more

SO hot!!!

Drake should "inspect" their room? Hehe

yes part 2 very hot

This looks like the beginning of a great story! Gavin turns out to be a prisoner who looks and acts rough, but has a tender side for Rory. But he doesn't want Rory to boast of Gavin's "good" or kind side.

Maybe Drake can get involved too. He seems a kinder guard. Both Drake and Gavin also seem to have brought exteriors -- maybe a good hairy chest for each man?? Keep going!

Please keep it coming. Gavin has to demonstrate his complete ownership, maybe Drake gets some, he and Gavin make sure Rory is well lookef after.

Amazing work!!!

I feel either Gavin doesn’t care for competition as long as he’s around and can see how Rory truly falls apart only with him so he gets on friendly terms with Drake(or maybe they already were).

There are a few details that are needed for this to work as a series such as a better description of Gavin(age hair build) and any other man that is gonna be on a sex scene and the relative time they’ll spend inside(Rory too) but other than this the story is perfect already as a one shot just that as a series a future will need to be set and these informations will be necessary.

There is a roughness and even fear in Gavin's character -- enough to scare Rory away at first. But when Rory "picks" Gavin, Gavin turns out to be a rough person only in public, and a more caring person in private.Sure, Gavin wants to maintain his rep as a tough guy who inspires fear in the prisoners, but he seems to have a tender side for Rory. When Rory boasts of Gavin's treatment, something that's meant to be private, Gavin is a bit angry with Rory. But I think Gavin has shown that he cares. I think Drake the guard could also be a caring person for Rory too.

I imagine both Gavin and Rory have their rough descriptions, but you didn't give the details. Does either man (or both) have the muscular build, the chest hair, the big cocks, that would really appeal to Rory? If Rory has to be here for awhile, it might be good that he found someone to safeguard and "possess" him.

Good writing and an interesting story. Please write more!

That was 🔥 🔥

It should definitely be a series. I love Gavin being dominant but still caring. It would be hot if Rory called him daddy. I definitely want to see them fuck, Rory get rimmed & blow Gavin.

I’d like to see this as a series. I’d also like to eventually see Rory’s cousin get some well deserved comeuppance.

Wooww. Please continue

yes please, continue

continue please

So hot. I loved it and got really hard reading the story!