by TheRachelChronicles
Another incredible addition to the series, and so soon after the previous chapter. Truly Jesus is blessing us on this damn Good Friday.
Or maybe it's the author's doing.
Easy 5 Star, TRC. You're a monster.
This was the hottest and sexiest chapter yet. Such intimate feelings by all the characters. Great plot and follow through. The anticipation was exceeded by the actual event.
I love how confident Rachel has become recently. She knows how to use her sexuality and how to get what she wants using the talents she's been blessed with. I get the feeling by the time she gets through college she'll have polished her skill-set enough to set her up just fine for the work place!
1st, hoping “Girl’s Night” includes some of what I think it will, and very much appreciate your plans for a multi-part encounter.
Thank you for having Rachel point out that she had in fact submitted the paper last time, and demonstrating that she was motivated by her attraction to Prof. Davis, as well as loyalty to Rebecca. She also made it clear this was important to her; I was very happy to see that as well.
Call me self-deceived, or anything else you like, I think it is important to maintain and defend those parts of Rachel”s essence that are good, even wholesome. I personally maintain my own perception that there is yet an inherent fragment of innocence in her, which is to be cherished.
When Rachel’s actions are directed by others, it leads to a dark place, regardless of how it starts. To me, it is an important distinction that her actions these last two chapters have been motivated by her own desires, and I am glad that was made clear.
I personally know quite a few who have survived most difficult challenges, many who have overcome personal demons, and that spark of goodness was essential to their recovery. I very much hope this spark remains, and grows, in Rachel. Rebecca as well, but especially Rachel; the dark periods in her past clearly indicate that she has been grievously wounded at some point.
I was relieved to see that “Office Hours” referred to Prof D, and not to Rich. Even though Rachel’s encounter with Rich was motivated by a fantasy of hers, I really don’t want her getting mixed up with men old enough to be her father, and I was uncomfortable with her knowingly seducing a heretofore faithful, married man - that crosses a moral line my self-deception does not want to confront.
Thank you very much for your outstanding works!
Thank you so much for coming back to the site, I just love all your work.
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Hi, this is arguably the best yet. I love lighthearted Rachel and her adventures. It takes some unreal talent to make such a dirty yet emotional story. This is the first time I actually felt jealous of the man here. I hope you continue down this path( dirty,breezy and heartfelt). Some more Kevin would be more welcome too.(just my opinion please. )
You are the most talented writer on this site. Please keep up your good work.
That there’s a story in the future of Freshman that involves two guys in the room at the same time ala Inferno or Team Player. That was crazy hot. Great story though! Loved it!
Also hoping to see another encounter with two guys at the same time. Those were crazy hot. All of your content is absolutely amazing.
Please tell me the next submissions are coming soon. Also I really hope Rachel has a few more experiences with Gregs dad...... That was simply outstanding
Really hope you continue with this! I miss following Rachel into her crazy sexual encounters.
Are we ever ganna get a Chapter 10 or am I just hoping for a miracle?
Would love to read more of this but seems unlikely since we’re 3 years into Rachel’s freshman year
We really want to know what Rachel and Rebecca are up to.
Honestly, I love the characters you have crafted. They feel real and genuine. You show them making good choices and bad choices and there are real consequences for both. The build-up scenes you write have an amazing way of hooking people and making all of us eager to see how you deliver the punch and damn if those scenes aren't FUCKING HOT!!! Whether you write strictly one on one scenes or put one of or both of your heroines through a proper gangbang I know I'm on board for the ride. My only real criticism is sometimes the chapters get a little more tell than show.
Update please, don’t be one of those authors who leave their work unfinished.
It's been 20 months already. Time flies. I'm still clutching on to hope that this masterwork will be continued some day.
I still come back, hoping. I hope that they are okay, and that they decide to continue Rachel’s story one day.
Started reading the entire Rachel series a couple weeks ago knowing it came to an abrupt end (so far) you've got yourself another fan and hope that you will one day keep writing about the adventures of Rachel and Rebecca.
Yes please!! I hope you are still alive and doing well! I have been waiting for 1 year in hopes of seeing where Rachel's erotic adventures lead her next!
Please do post girl's night! Your fans are anxiously waiting!
Sad to see you go, but thank you for this wonderful series. I hope you are well and wish you the best!