All Comments on 'Friend Or Predator'

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Bi47Bi47about 3 years ago

Excellent very story๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Boring.

Was this written by a chick? Gave up before it got remotely sexy or interesting. Came here horned up; not even in the mood now. Your writing is as sexy as a 90 year old narrator, which is to say not at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
So many mistakes

The mistakes in spelling, grammar, sentence structure and phrasing made this story unreadable. It got worse as it went along. By the second page, I had to stop. Too frustrated and confusing to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Question

We have all experienced this but the question this time is are you a Friend or a Predator.

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Career; apprentice engineer to Company Director. I have had a number of blog stories published on the web and on this site, short stories which have been based on real life events. Some of my stories are provocative and erotic. Each story has a message about how we see ou...