All Comments on 'Friends & Family Ch. 06'

to tell us the time period during which this story occurs the author explains thusly.

"This is the ongoing chapters of me growing up in the Midwest in the late spring and early summer of 1971"

These chapters cover the times that I was just 20 thru 22"

in other words 4 years in 4 months. or 1 year per month, a 12 x 1 aging ratio. worse than dog years. during the next 5 years he will age 60 years.

A lot of your minor errors can be found without an editor, if you simply take the time to actually read the story yourself, completely, before posting.