All Comments on 'Friends, Enemies, and Exes Ch. 03'

Wow, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

You've got a couple issues near the end..

Typo?

"I want to eat your pussy," April blurted.

The typos come at a bad time. I'm thinking who's April?

Otherwise, shaping up to be a good story. Please continue.

If self editing, don't be in such a rush, quality first.

I was toying with a story like yours but in mine the male was more evil was going to use his power to enslave all the all the girls around him well you beat me to the punch good story.

Fantastic, Just read the initial 3 installments. More please. I think Charlie will be very comfortable in his new home.

Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

This guy is seriously just a complete asshole. FFS he just fucked up all these girls lives and pretends it didn't happen? Seriously this premise is annoying as hell.