All Comments on 'Friends, Enemies, and Exes Ch. 05'

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AmbivalenceAmbivalencealmost 5 years ago
Hmmm.... I wonder about Charlie's reaction...

Will be punish some people for what Laine was made to do...?

Does he consider her *his*...?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Katie's entrance?

Well, you keep teasing us with Katie... I am really interested in finding out how she will fit into all of this.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
Very good!

I really like that this story is getting some twists and turns... Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

yeah, honestly the Lanie scenes are disturbing and sad.

flynndriderflynndriderabout 4 years ago

Tue Lanie scenes are a mood killer

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Aspiring screenwriter and novelist, here to get out the erotic scenarios in my mind so that I'm not tempted to put them in my non-erotic stories where they don't belong. My work, in general, is going to be more story based. It may be a playground for my fantasies, but it can a...