All Comments on 'Friends, Enemies, and Exes Ch. 06'

Great story. Thank you.

You are a very talented writer.

Thanks so much for writing this series! I really feel as though you understand what makes an encounter or a situation sexy, with a masterful focus on character and power dynamics. I can absolutely picture each girl and what they would be like to meet in person, and that makes the sex scenes so much more compelling. I can't wait to read future installments!

If you do take audience feedback, I think that the mental component to Charlie's power is much more compelling than the physical component. I would love for him to do more with reading minds or teaching Penny to manipulate thoughts, maybe even pulling her in to watch a rewiring could be very interesting. I don't understand why there's a need for Charlie to manipulate the bodies of his girls with cum. Part of the fun of having nearly 30 women in the story is that they can all have different body types and be sexy in different ways. The idea that he's making them all look more like each other is a little boring! What about taking away their anxieties about their bodies and having that appeal to certain other girls?

Just some thoughts, thanks for writing with such craft and care!

Great story just needs lots more.

I like it. Please don't stop until the series is finished.

I'm so interested in what's gonna happen to Katie, I've actually stopped reading the porn. If you abandon this I will hunt you down and beat the ending out of you.