All Comments on 'Friends, Enemies, and Exes Ch. 08'

by RootOfTheStory

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TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
Wow!

A great addition to this story, I'm looking forward to reading where this goes! Thank you!

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceover 4 years ago
I guess I find it a little odd...

that Charlie can't *tell* when someone has been rewired...

All of this time that Penny had been rewired by Katie and he never has noticed it...

Makes you wonder who's the more talented between him and Katie...

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Aspiring screenwriter and novelist, here to get out the erotic scenarios in my mind so that I'm not tempted to put them in my non-erotic stories where they don't belong. My work, in general, is going to be more story based. It may be a playground for my fantasies, but it can a...