by Dudeman85
you continuously find a great "friends" topic to pursue and expand so greatly on it, that its hard to ever watch the show now without thinking what ifs! your descriptions and pacing of the storing keeps getting better and the length is just perfect with 2 full pages. keep on writing. excellent work.
a) sexy as ever!
b) i'll have you know i was late for work this morning because i *had* to read this before i left!
c) if we all submit money, could you write full time? these month-long waits are *brutal*!
4) rachel. anal. pleeeeease! (she's my fave!)
More Rachel please!!!
You are the best writer on literotica.
Keep up the good work!
Loved it. Absolutely brilliant. Please do another one with just all the girls
woah i come back every day just to see if you have updated. would we have to wait uch longer. dear god u need to find more time to write you soooo good at it. loved this story though
i cant wait for you next one going by your authers note :>
This is my 1st read of your writing, and I am truly amazed at the heat and eroticism. You know how every guy feels about Rachel, but you aren't crude and explotive with your story. I truly can't remember Mona's appearance on the show, but that fact is irrelevant as you made a female character unlease Rachel's latent passion with stupendous results. It could have been a bag lady, and you would have created a vision I will long remember. Much Thanks!
Dixiebullfrog
that has to be ten outta ten. ur the best writter on this site. write more rachel please!
I love the rachel stories and i think she should have more rough sex with joey!