All Comments on 'Friends Stick Together'

You might consider putting your work through a bit more editing before posting. It is difficult to follow what's happening in a few places.

Outch, sorry about that. I try to correct most of my grammatical errors, but when it's about context and phrasing I have a hard time finding out, as English is not my mother tongue. (That, plus my story telling which clearly isn't perfect!) Thank you for the advice though, I'll do my best for part two!

Contentwise, it has a little bit of everything I love, and the scenario shows good promise. But I do agree that some parts are difficult to follow.

Looking forward to more.