All Comments on 'Friends with Consequences Ch. 03'

I don't remember a male character in an adult story as badly written as Max is in this one. It's as if the author has either never met an functioning adult male or they have and hate them all.

You’ve got a great writing style, and the series is a great turnabout on the traditional “step-by-step, slowly seduce an inexperienced teen girl” narrative. I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

Dislike Linda being such a user

Having Max be as naive as a box is getting tedious.. The girl is eager. He knows that now. She enjoys his cum. But he will be a selfish dink if he doesn’t learn how to pleasure her in return.

This isn’t a slow build. Linda feels malicious. And Max feels pathetic. I will stick with this because I like you, Aims. But, right now, I dislike these characters. I’m not cheering for Linda. I’m not routing for Max.

Sex feels best when it’s a collaboration. This feels much more like Linda is playing and using Max. And Max needs to step up and start to be more than a walking, talking hard-on, eager to give up on his beliefs for a couple blow jobs and a hand-job.

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yeah i agree with GrantLeeStone. Linda is a rapist and Max is a dumbass pushover

Gotta agree with others, Max is simple and is selfish and mean.