All Comments on 'From Ashes the Phoenix Rises'

Why start with the synopsis? It looked like a prolog so I read it. After that the story itself was anti-climactic.

I ENJOYED YOUR LANGUAGE, YOUR STORY AND YOUR ATTITUDE

You gotta watch out for those blondes. They're really quick.

Deserves more stars!

The other day I was reading Anaïs Nin and wondering about how her erotica was so different from most of what I read at Literotica. Part of it is the short, simple sentences that remind one of Hemingway. But also it was erotic not because it had tons of explicit description but because there was mystery in why the people did what they did. They were pulled by erotic forces that they didn't fully understand. This series has some of that same mystery.

and alone serves you right whore,