All Comments on 'From Claire to Davina Pt. 04'

by ernesto77

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good but

How long before someone break ? Fantasy is great but 3 months without tenderness, love, Care.... I thing that Autumn will get our héro without too much efforts... And Davina Can be with Jason

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Don't understand why he

hasn't left already. It's not obvious from the storyline that he's into maltreatment, seemingly the opposite. So why would he still be putting up with it?

ernesto77ernesto77almost 4 years agoAuthor

It says right in the story he is into it. That he lists after her. Am I missing something.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thank you

I just want to say that I think you are an amazing writer. Great job!

ernesto77ernesto77over 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks that’s really nice to hear

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too Disjointed

First you have the guy get into cock cage with no instructions about cleaning it or using some baby oil to help the chafing. You have Davina going to a club but not doing anything to her husband when she comes home? Then it is 3 months later? What does he do at work with a cage? Humiliation? What happens during that 3 month period? More clubs? Does anyone actually get to fuck with Davina during that time? Does she only get off with a vibrator? For what little stuff he did, he sure is getting a lot more abuse. A unique twist with a games night. As usual it is stacked against him. Will there be an end to this story?

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