All Comments on 'From Housewife to a Slut'

Please get your work proofread. The multiple spelling errors completely disrupts what looks like a promising story

I got the impression that English isn’t your first language? If it isn’t the wow am I impressed that you’re writing stories in a foreign language, it’s difficult to learn even for native speakers. I’m in agreement with the other comment, there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors in this story which makes it difficult to read, so I’d recommend a proofreader/ editor or failing that try reading it out aloud to yourself.

Thanks for sharing, Tess (uk)