All Comments on 'From Pampered to Prized 01'

where's it going? What happens next?

Amazing story. Short and sweet and your skill as a writer is impressive. You're able to hook me, build suspense, and relieve tension in a few short pages. Your attention to detail is quite good too when you're describing something; not too little detail or too much, and with pertinent, vivid details. A good example is when you discuss the appearance of her body; "I'm 5'5" right at the cusp of being petite. My hair used to be changed with every moody whim but is now its natural light brown, falling just below my shoulder blades when he lets it down. My skin is soft and pale..."

I also very much appreciate your use of proper punctuation, grammar, and spelling. If there are mistakes then I didn't notice them since I was enthralled by the story. Have you ever read one of these stories and are pulled out of the story because the grammar and spelling are so bad?

Great job! I can't wait for the follow up. :D

More please🥹

So very good. This needs more!

Great start. Sad to think there isn't more to come.