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Cast of characters active in this chapter.
- Jim Smith - Father / Husband
- Abbi Smith - Mother / Wife
- Josh Smith - Son / Brother
- Heather Smith - Daughter / Sister
- Melissa Wayne -- Jim's Personal Assistant and newest Lover
- Steve Summers -- Driver / Jim's Personal Security
- Dr. Edward McCoy -- Chief Medical Officer at Ardent Technologies
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoSo you really think a man, whose wife is dying, is going to fuck some slut? Get real. 1 for your arrogant ignorance
Robcan57over 1 year agoYou need to clean this up, talk about difficult to read!, If you're gonna write a story in the first person , than keep it that way, and it seems like you could use a new editor or two, or at least a proofreader. Great story, but Im inclined to ignore the rest of it as it's so difficult to read!!
Anonymousalmost 2 years ago10 months and counting down for the next chapter. Even with such a good start, reader's attention can go elsewhere.
tlevanssrover 2 years agoYou started out very well. Am waiting for the next chapter. Please don't stop now like some writers do.
Kpick96205over 2 years agoSo far well done. I like how you built your storyboard and then integrated the characters. Just well done. I look forward to your additional chapters. Don't worry about the nay sayers.... Keep up the good work and keep the chapters cumming!!!!!!
Dogmancyprusover 2 years agoChapters 1 & 2 were great, but as soon as you brought the brother & sister in at Chapter 3 it went completely downhill not even 2*.
Get back to the main story or forget about it.
WetheNorthover 2 years agoHave respect for your readers and get your stories properly proof read
