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So you really think a man, whose wife is dying, is going to fuck some slut? Get real. 1 for your arrogant ignorance
You need to clean this up, talk about difficult to read!, If you're gonna write a story in the first person , than keep it that way, and it seems like you could use a new editor or two, or at least a proofreader. Great story, but Im inclined to ignore the rest of it as it's so difficult to read!!
10 months and counting down for the next chapter. Even with such a good start, reader's attention can go elsewhere.
You started out very well. Am waiting for the next chapter. Please don't stop now like some writers do.