by HardTime4_69
I like where you are headed with this. I hope you focus on the loving side of this relationship. I know they have to explore and feel the boundaries of their couplings, but I hope we still feel the emotions between them. The happy and excited feelings that people have when they know what they are doing is right and so satisfying. Thank you for your time and imagination. 5 stars.
I really like this story. I have never read a story about Littles with an actual dad with his actual daughter. I am not usually a fan of littles because it seems daddies spank/beat little girls for absolutely any reason which is a turn off for me. I know the girl gets off eventually but it just is a little too brutal for me. However-this daddy doesn’t seem to be into spanking//beating just for the sake of spanking/beating. I like it that he shares his thoughts of wanting to please her by telling her she’s a good girl. Don’t get me wrong, I don’t mind daddies spanking little girls if it’s actually justified. This story seems like it’s going in a great direction and it is steamy and hot as hell! Plus it’s a real daddy with a real daughter. I cannot wait until the next part comes out.
One more thing! Adding another thought on what I just posted above. I like how this is evolving. I enjoy reading how much they both felt that what was happening was right. And the way you write the sex scenes is incredible. The detail! I found myself holding my breath a lot while reading this. And that isn't something I normally do. Just keep doing what you are doing. Thank you for writing this! **********
A total tangling of lust - details certainly MAKE the story so complete! Have to say - 'Keep 'em cumin!'