All Comments on 'From Under the Table'

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Venus_in_FursVenus_in_Fursover 17 years ago
Not bad

Very amusing ending, unexpected. I liked this, a good read with few typos and spelling errors and such.

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Jerk doesn't deserve her..

..so the sooner she switches, the better. Nice tale, and the element of realism cranked up the kicks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!

I love the ending!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Sequel

I would love to see a follow up or a sequel of full fledged story from this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

the "cheating is common" remark hurts the story also many tables have cloth that touches the floor 4.5 out of 5 not bad but you could expand it

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