All Comments on 'From Under the Table'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

the "cheating is common" remark hurts the story also many tables have cloth that touches the floor 4.5 out of 5 not bad but you could expand it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sequel

I would love to see a follow up or a sequel of full fledged story from this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great!

I love the ending!

ErotonautErotonautover 17 years ago
Jerk doesn't deserve her..

..so the sooner she switches, the better. Nice tale, and the element of realism cranked up the kicks.

Venus_in_FursVenus_in_Fursover 17 years ago
Not bad

Very amusing ending, unexpected. I liked this, a good read with few typos and spelling errors and such.

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