by Eli is Coming
the "cheating is common" remark hurts the story also many tables have cloth that touches the floor 4.5 out of 5 not bad but you could expand it
I would love to see a follow up or a sequel of full fledged story from this.
..so the sooner she switches, the better. Nice tale, and the element of realism cranked up the kicks.
Very amusing ending, unexpected. I liked this, a good read with few typos and spelling errors and such.