All Comments on 'From Vanilla to Slave Pt. 01'

Starts slow, but a promising scenario.

Interesting premise.

But it's all just buildup.

The playing with his cock is much too abbreviated. Too automatic.

Nothing about her body at all, really.

And you wrote" "Who has a draw full of stuff like that at the office?" You meant DRAWER, not DRAW.

Four stars for potential as yet unrealized.

Very enjoyable. Good writing. Thanks. Can't wait for the he t chapter

On the job training for Nate? Looking fwd. to next chap.

meh. Sexual harassment. I like clearer consent. ok, it's a story...

Very good, keep going.