All Comments on 'From Wife to Slut Slave Ch. 04'

Really an untagged cuck story, so, drivel.

Scores 1/5

The reason people hate this story is because you reduced your central characters into cardboard cutouts. Caricatures. One dimensional things.

Husbands, unless they hate their wives, will want to protect them, not revel in their debasement.

Likewise, Mika should hate her tattoo, unless she gets it burnt off, it is there for life and no serious tattoo artist will do it on a moments notice.

But lets talk physiology. Yeast infections, STD’s, UTI’s, pregnancy risks, these are common problems with just one partner, let alone multiple. Throw in bad dates, because her master is essentially her pimp, and she risks physical violence…and is that a turn on for you?

Do you think it turns most women on having a nasty yeast infection? Or a painful UTI, or applying makeup because her “date” best the shit out of her because he couldn’t get it up?

You had a happy ending where everyone loves the changes but you really had to twist human psychology in knots to make it.

We don’t want porn stars writing stories because those plots suck ass. We want to see real people struggle with the choices they’ve made or were made for them.

3 parts in BDSM and suddenly the story becomes LW! Really? I don't know what this is about, but after 3 parts in BDSM for sure it doesn't belong in LW! 1* for that

Bear with me whilst I clean up my vomit. Having tried to read this drivel I was reduced to tears as to how low some authors are prepared to go.

More racist bullshit. 1*

I find it hard to understand how you think crap like this makes the black man seem superior. On the contrary, it goes hand in hand with most racial stereotypes and tropes. You make your characters to appear as mindless, abusive, ignorant dolts. Are you a black guy with a little dick, or a white guy with a guilt complex? And this master/slave shit, get over yourself, go play with mommies' panties rather than submit garbage like this. Gahh, this was repulsive. 1*

Why bring this BDSM story to LW? Looking for views? Well, you'll get them, but you'll also get low scores.

"I would recommending reading "From Wife to Slut Slave Ch. 1 - 3" first." - I enjoy LW stories, why should I have to read three chapters in BDSM first? No thanks.

@whackdoodle go find some other site to spew your nonsense. These are fantasy stories where reality is suspended for the time being. Just because it doesn't fit into your idea of what turns you on doesn't mean it doesn't turn others on. Geeze, you sound like some religious do gooder nutjob. Get a fucking life and leave others to their own fantasies.

Should have stayed in BDSM.

Tags said it all. Wrong category. Automatic one star rating.

How do you get the title “master”? Do you go to school and get a masters degree, or is it just a delusional self designation like the equally ridiculous “bull”?

If you're going to write BDSM garbage at least post it there so no one has to read it

Let Chris wake up and upset the plans.

Pure crap and just cuz I am a fucking sweetheart I'll finish this sentence for you...

"To reiterate like I have in previous chapters, I am in no way a professional erotica writer, nor an amateur writer, or a good writer, or a decent writer and I cant grasp erotic but if crap is what you want, I'm your man!!!"

Love love love just loved it hope to read more more lots more

What a piece of shit. Just skimmed it not worth reading all of it.

Not my cup of tea! Every character in this is utterly sickening. I can't see this as erotic, nor even remotely possible. I'm done. Gotta go vomit.

Not my cup of tea! Every character in this is utterly sickening. I can't see this as erotic, nor even remotely possible. I'm done. Gotta go vomit.