All Comments on 'Frozen Hearts'

Personally, I prefer the tender, caring mg stories. I have only one issue. This story isn't nearly long enough. I saw at least a half a dozen places where there could have been (and in my mind should have been) longer descriptions, and or explanations. That said if this is just a preview for something larger, then I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up.

I really enjoyed this softer story, but some days I do prefer the more dominating ones. Luckily today wasn't one of those days.

Gentle can be very good.

It could be longer. Mostly I'm just hoping for chapters describing them conquering and covering a kingdom in ice

I enjoyed this one a lot, maybe a bit more romance & character developement (of course that’s just something that I like) other than that, very well done

This was such a Great Short Story to the pint where it sort of feels like a Frozen Parody more Specific an Frozen Elsa Parody in a way but in a Good Way. I think the only Nip Pick about it is that I kind of wished you have written this in either one of the POV's because it just feels it would read better, again in a way. But as I have said Good Short Story.

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11/10!!!!!