by thiscouldbtricky
I love this story. I will marry it, or at least fuck it on the side while I complain about my wife not fulfulling my needs.
It was like reading the script of an encounter I would have ... I loved it !!
I loved this. Love the way you built the anticipation. The fact that I imagined it at SeaTac probably brought me closer to what you were thinking. WoW!!!
how hot can it get? if this girl is half as hot as her character, then she's a real pistol!!
MArc in Florida
while reading this story, felt like i was being sucked into it at the same time, very gripping and would enjoy reading more from this author. Keep up the good work. :)
Flying in to seatac will never be the same.. I suspect I'll be replaying this story in my head every time now.
thanks.. a wonderful, well told story
Wow, reading this really got my day going!! Your creativity and the sexual imagery you create are wonderful. Such expresive thoughts all wrapped up as a truely sensual fantasy turn me on like crazy!! You got me....I am hooked....I am now a Fan!! Can't wait to read more from you Babe.....please keep up the great work!!!
Absolutely riveting...very nice indeed! Hope to see more.
Loved the detail of the experience. It was almost like being there.
mmm .. yummy story, very erotic... I could SO see myself there with you... doing everything!
I loved your story. I can hardly wait for your encore. Very nice and sexy. Thanks, H
Wonderful story!
Perhaps it's that I love the tease, the passion. I also have a thing for sex in semi public places and cars. This is a solid 10 of 10 in my book. Thank you.
The part where he's eating her pussy is so well written, I almost came without taking my cock out! Well done, looking forward to more! Kisses...
did you write that yourself? it was hot regardless, sort of reminds me of a one time affair I had... well close enough anyway... we never made it out of the car.
You definately seem to know what it's like in the mind of somebody so overcome with desire.... you describe it vividly. I look forward to future chapters.
I knew you were a slutty kinky bitch baby, but I never knew you were such a story teller:)
Master
"Like a little girl playing rough with her toys, to see how much it takes to break them."
Love that line. This was a great frist piece. Love the subject. Hope to see more from you.
A very vivid erotic story that is completely explained by the imagery evoked in the telling. That's a rare talent and your to be congratulated for having the talent and using it to tell your tale. Thank You. Ronnie W.
You have a real talent for making the images come to life... I could almost feel her hand rubbing me and her lips on me. I hope to see more from you.
Such release! What a lovely, wicked little story. Loved the senario that you developed, the description of the woman, and especially the eager cocksucking. She's a hot, exotic woman in the story - a sexy nameless gal that knows what she wants, and how to get it. Great job, will be looking for more from "Thiscouldbtricky".
Very well written indeed Tricky, I do love to read erotica written from a girls point of view, and you are such a naughty little tease... ;)
Very Descriptive... the writer makes me feel like i'm there. I know that's the point, but they did a great job on it! Can't wait for the follow-ups.