by plazabull
It is a good story, good betails, the grammar is good and doesn’t detract from the storyline. Well written, though the blackmail is maybe a little week.
Outstanding
A proper gentleman keeping his wife's mother company. Not sure the blackmail took as long as a week, like a previous poster commented. He might of meant that it was weak, however he was raving about the good grammar, so I doubt it. And furthermore it seemed like pretty solid blackmail to me.
Very nice. Paul should have gotten video of his mother in law taking hi cock right next her daughter, his wife.