by MidnightTease118
why the re-post ? i loved it the first time you posted it and will give it another 5 stars
I just wanted to change the title a bit from Ch. to Pt. to match the rest of my stories. A little pet peeve is all. Thank you for taking the time to rate it again. Take care!
It is useless to kill characters right after introduction. The reader has not jet developed any connection to them.