by sadboi23
I liked this story, and I know this is a very early stage in your writing so keep writing, but!
I found the characters and action a little cold. There was no feeling of lust, anger or revenge shown, Yes Parvati is crying, you could expand on that and explain why more. Why is she doing what she is, revenge or lust.
Just a point to consider in your future stories.
I'll never forget my first Indian woman. Her husband was my coworker. He lived and worked here but she was in London with their family until he could afford to fetch her. To 'help' him save money, he moved in with us. We started sharing my wife on condition his wife became equally shared when she finally joined him. She knew in advance and was eager but inhibited and inexperienced. It was a lot of fun breaking her in.
Typical race mixing cuck shit.
Your women are being taken by Nogs so you lust after Indian and Asian women
FUCKING AN INDIAN WIFE is an excrllent Indian wife sex story. I gave you a 5- (100%)!