All Comments on 'Fucking an Indian Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs a 2nd chapter

Maybe this time write it in LW.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 3 years ago

Not too bad but needs finishing to be better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Can do better

Good to know how the Indian boss fucked his white wife

NikkiejanesNikkiejanesover 3 years ago
Good try

I liked this story, and I know this is a very early stage in your writing so keep writing, but!

I found the characters and action a little cold. There was no feeling of lust, anger or revenge shown, Yes Parvati is crying, you could expand on that and explain why more. Why is she doing what she is, revenge or lust.

Just a point to consider in your future stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Memories

I'll never forget my first Indian woman. Her husband was my coworker. He lived and worked here but she was in London with their family until he could afford to fetch her. To 'help' him save money, he moved in with us. We started sharing my wife on condition his wife became equally shared when she finally joined him. She knew in advance and was eager but inhibited and inexperienced. It was a lot of fun breaking her in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The white boss fucked the Indian immigrant wife

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

more please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Typical race mixing cuck shit.

Your women are being taken by Nogs so you lust after Indian and Asian women

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

FUCKING AN INDIAN WIFE is an excrllent Indian wife sex story. I gave you a 5- (100%)!

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