All Comments on 'Fucking Magic - A Potion Problem Ch. 08'

Seems like you're bouncing around in all the categories, glad you're back to incest.

The memory stuff is confusing and I don't know why you took that route

So good. I can't wait.

Great story. I hope you continue

Not a fan of this entry really not much relevant to the whole story going on here

This got confusing

Great series.

This is a fun series and I can't wait to see where you take it! Your writing keeps improving and the alternate POV worked better in this installment. The initial episodes were quite confusing and I was not sure if you were trying to demonstrate his shock and confusion or if your stream of thoughts were just too unfocused. Thank you for writing and sharing. You might consider a quick synopsis or your thoughts at the beginning of each chapter, especially if posted in different sections. So looking forward to interactions with Jessica's sister, mom, Samara, Elaine, and Aubrey as the series progresses.

Still hoping you continue this story. Been about 5 months?