by Defluer
Keep doing what you're doing. I love your DeFleur stories. Sorry I don't comment, but I think you should hear it, now. All the twists, turns, and depravity. I especially like this bit of magic you've introduced. DeFleur is a magical place, all of that could explain why everything happens the way it does.
I am enjoying the story, curious to see where it goes. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
I think many people see this as confusing because you have the stories listed under incest/taboo vs science fiction/fantasy. I also think you need to have your protagonist meet the sister sooner than later so you can explain how the world works
Hey...this is a fun story and you need to go with your muse! Sure, I will enjoy it if the sister and cousin join Mom and Aunt. It would be great if he helps out and runs into someone magical at the home if he hooks up with Samara. He definitely needs more Ms. Soder and her other daughter. I want him get with a doegirl...maybe his USB can help communication. Take our imaginations on a rollercoaster ride. Thank you and keep up the great work.
I like you're stories. I hope you keep writing them, so that I can keep reading them. Thank you for you're efforts
Just found and read all 9 chapters. I’m liking the progression into the occult. It’s refreshingly original. Please continue, this has the beginnings for an epic story!!!