All Comments on 'Fucking My Oddball Bosses Wife Pt. 02'

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Anonymousover 4 years ago

Did you bother to proof read this?

It's a complete trainwreck. Full of horrible characters and disjointed dialogue.

1 star

Anonymousover 4 years ago

re: Did you bother to proof read this?

The title provides the answer, which is "no".

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Bosses is plural. Boss's is possessive. Bosses' is plural possessive. If the "writer" can't get that very easy concept right, it should have been obvious the story would be a mess.

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Great story

Please keep writing maybe another part soon

Anonymousover 4 years ago

The hell with the previous review!!

What a 180 at the end! This definitely deserves a third chapter with them going on a trip and hooking up with another couple.

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