All Comments on 'Fucktopia Pt. 04: Lord Crypto Lucas'

this is a really good story although you should probably use spell check or google the spelling of some words and read it through to check grammar the grammar doesn't have to be perfect but if reading it out loud it doesn't sound right fix it. I can't wait for more of this story and hope jason can help fix some of what the virus has caused and fix things that could cause problems in the future since the can live forever can you imagine a population boom in that situation. it would be really bad

Thank you @cindyp1976 for your feedback. I am really happy that you have enjoyed the story so far. I will work towards improving my spelling and grammar. I am already working on the next part of this story and will publish it soon.