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by Declan Cravens

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Shades of Halloween

It's clever, and a mildly spooky ghost story. Well written and keeps the suspence going. But I only liked it mildly.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Wonderful

I really enjoyed reading your story and can't wait to read more. Good luck in the contest.

dth7018dth7018over 14 years ago
Good Story, Bad Science

Nice story. Well written. Sad ending, though. And the moon being above the northern star bothered me, since the moon is always in the southern sky when viewed from the northern hemisphere.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome Story

I loved it! Keep writing.

MiaStormRoseMiaStormRoseabout 7 years ago

I loved this. The ending was surprising and made me sad. I had hoped for a Happy ending but not every story has a Happy ending. Thank you so much for a wonderful story

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userDeclan Cravens@Declan Cravens
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Full time writer, hot mom with an empty nest and too much imagination. Ghostwriter extraordinaire. Feel free to contact me with questions or suggestions. I love hearing from readers!