by Declan Cravens
I loved this. The ending was surprising and made me sad. I had hoped for a Happy ending but not every story has a Happy ending. Thank you so much for a wonderful story
Nice story. Well written. Sad ending, though. And the moon being above the northern star bothered me, since the moon is always in the southern sky when viewed from the northern hemisphere.
I really enjoyed reading your story and can't wait to read more. Good luck in the contest.
It's clever, and a mildly spooky ghost story. Well written and keeps the suspence going. But I only liked it mildly.