by CB_Grl_Dani
Very nice. Loved how you wrote the love scene between two inexperienced lovers in contrast to the Mature/Virgin scene of Part 1.
Another great tale, not many editing problems and a nice flow to the words. The characters are believable and empathetic, while the sex was hot enough without being extremely graphic. This provides a great romantic story. The only thing that I would have liked to see was for Clare to get a little action since you made her so desirable. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated, I know it is work but it's worth our enjoyment, you've done very well 💞🥵👍.
Despite this being the one with the least bright future money-wise for the family, I like it the best. There's something about high-school loves turning into lasting relationships that makes me sappy!