All Comments on 'Fun For The Family'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Honestly, I was not impressed. Too may stories like this, all written mediocre.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really good until the mother who lost her husband was invited to an incest orgy when she'd barely had sex with one individual other than her husband. Still a really hot story till that point.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story! But the mother's name changed briefly from Cheryl to Claire, and then back to Cheryl. Maybe a quick edit to clean that up? It was a little off putting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That was by far the best family story I have ever read it was totally believable awesome job

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