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goducks111goducks111almost 4 years ago
a little short

but great continuation can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Mmm more more more

Love it. Good detail, great effort. A small amount of bisexual guys would spice it up for me

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Punctuating Dialogue

When one paragraph ends with a quotation mark and the very next one starts with a mark, that indicates the character speaking has changed. When one character is speaking and is not uninterrupted by narrative or another character talking, every paragraph starts with a mark, but only the last one has a closing mark.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very nice

For a first time contributor your description was very vivid. Short but fun to read. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More

There has to be several more parts to this story. Several more combinations to be had.j

blackknight314blackknight314almost 3 years ago

Hard to keep all of the players straight without a program.

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You will find that nearly all, but not all, of my stories have a common denominator. I want my characters to be joyful in life. I want them to be happy. If stretching sexual boundaries does that for them, it is fine with me. It's just sex, after all.

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