All Comments on 'Fun in the Dunes'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too convoluted a story for me. But Gran Canaria and Maspalomas I know well. I was there from Christmas Eve 2022 until 2 January 2023.

KittyLover80KittyLover809 months ago

Very interesting. Keep the plot going. Thanks for writing this.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago
excellent story!

This is a great story with a marvelous array of characters, and plenty of love scenes to go with an excellent plot. Well-written, the story of Liam definitely needs to be continued.

KerrionKerrion5 months ago

Great story, but I would have thought you would have finished it with events from the after wedding dinner party and Liam & Louise formally getting together.

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