by MaxingMollz
please make the chapters longer so i can get my fix. if you do, ill love you forever.
Yes longer would be so much better. I can't wait to see where this story goes!
Writers that are into their work and have the story planned out bring forth more in a timely fashion. I think this writer got caught up in real life and we won't be seeing anything any time soon to finish this.
Nice form, moving well, plot concise, and your grammar and spelling are top notch. Hope to read more from you. Cudoos.
You need to keep writing. Amazing start to the story you have set up but I would wish you had new chapters. I check every time I'm on just in case there's something new. Keep up the great writing.
Yet another author who deserves a private room in hell. I'm getting ready to abandon literotica altogether. The number of incomplete and abandoned stories is staggering. They NEED to be flagged. I get so pissed when I read several chapters just to find the author just stops. Seems a majority on this site.
this story was done in 2015, sad that it was never finished