All Comments on 'Futa and The Cuck's Wife Ch. 01'

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kindzazakindzazaover 1 year ago

Great story. Too bad it's short. My rating is 5!

EhsheehsheEhsheehsheover 1 year ago

love this story great work would like to see it evolve a little further, maybe even the husband being turned into a real woman and getting pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

First third good. Second third with Futa on male could have done without. Last third accepting wife's pregnancy by Futa just tanked it for me. Better luck next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

loved it! 5 Stars! .. Please do part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

i dont know why people are giving low ratings? this was 5 stars for me! i wish there was more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It seems literally all the negative ratings are just from people who dislike the fetish.

To someone whose opinion is applicable, this is great. Can't wait for more futacuck from you.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You have set a very low bar if you think this is five star storytelling.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Lost me right at the start. A 4 year deployment with no time off for home leave. Maybe WWII not current day. Four years in he'll and you expect him to just roll over for a cute who thinks its dominant. No cuts and wife are bare asked naked on front lawn 10 seconds after they are discovered. For a work of fiction were curse don't strain credulity this wimp knees from a soldier did..

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Decent story. Felt rushed near the end. I advise getting an editor or doing more proof reading because the man definitely shouldn't have tentacles.

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