All Comments on 'Futa Elf Farms Ch. 01'

The story itself is alright, but the text could use a proofread or two to comb out spelling errors and smooth some of the sentences. Cervical penetration always makes me flinch but I've grudgingly accepted it's a staple of the genre.

Unlike Sir Digby, I haven't learned to accept cervical penetration - but maybe elves have different anatomy. Otherwise great fun.

Well, what's next, will Mia gave in to her incestual lust and start fucking rest of her family? I hope you continue this, it has potential.

Good work

I can promise cervical penetration won't feature regularly in my writing. I'll tag it in the future if and when it does come up, didn't think of it.