by Wanksalo
Yeesh, what a bad story. The MC is worse than the bully, Carrie is a psychopath, and they don't even become lovers. Where's the appeal?
Cool a revenge story... with many plot holes and MC doing something completely dumb and got off lucky. Could of put more thought into her revenge just so cops did not have to be involved at all.
Story wasn’t bad. The concept was good, but it was a bit rushed and full of grammatical mistakes.
loved it personally it would better, if it was slower, rather than too fast but other than that, it seems like it could use a sequel where Brittany discovers she is pregnant but her parents would never let her abort the child nor put the child up for adoption despite the child being a revenge for her bullying ways from bullying jae, while some may call rape harsh, in certain circumstances i call it righteous justice, yes i know this is unethical, but remember naysayers these stories are fictional, ie. not truth. ie. imaginative stories. do i need to continue good.