All Comments on 'Futanari Notebook Ch. 28'

Dont let anyone get you down! This series is hot as fuck and I cant wait for the next one!

So I read all 28 chapters of this story in the last two days. First off I have to say it is well written and I do enjoy the slow corruption of the main character but the absolute lack of proper sex scenes for 20 or so chapters is quite annoying.

I really wanna know why the hell you cut away from Zoey and her sister fucking, Ashley and Mary fucking and Dakota and Mary fucking.

You set those sex scenes up with a proper build up and instead of rewarding your readers with them you just cut away to more boring slow corruption of the main character.

All I can say is its well written but not satisfying to read.

I agree with Toni, the series are amazing, but there's a lot of avoided sex for some reason 🤷‍♂️

Hey another great chapter. Is 29 coming soon? Can’t wait to read it. Keep going :)

I love this series and if I had a one thing to say other than it being a little slow paced I would suggest maybe adding some more scenes in which Carmen loses control. Otherwise I love the series and it’s one of the top for me on this site so keep writing these!

Best. Chapter.