All Comments on 'Fyre'

by FrostedBlade

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great Stuff!

Love it! Write more soon!

savannuhsavannuhabout 15 years ago
I've read this story about 2,3867,798 times...!

it never ever ever EVER gets old. It's damn near the HOTTEST thing I've read. I actually feel bad for only just now commenting (sorry!). Not sure where you went or if you're ever coming back, but I'd love to read more from you!

kinkykayekayekinkykayekayealmost 15 years ago
more please

Please write more, I greatly enjoyed your story and went hunting for the rest of it. Please please, lol I have dabbled in writing erotica but yours is the real deal. Thanl you for sharing it with us

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Please Finish It!

This is one of the most interesting concepts I have ever seen. Please finish it.

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 14 years ago
Oh Wow!

What are you doing?? Continue this story please. It was such an intriguing story. I admit the large cock being seen through her stomach skin was kinda strange but this story still had my juices flowing.

Please write another to continue this story. Sending this story on to friends to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good job!

I really like it and I hope that you add the rest of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good story but...

... Can you say "Anatomically Impossible Sex"? Cervixes do not work like that.

Love the imagery though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fantastically Hot

Wow, now that is hot. Please write more chapters!

firetongsfiretongsover 10 years ago
HOT stuff well done!

Mmmm what a lovely fyre story!

Yes please do write another fyre tail.

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